Becky's Writing ([info]becky_writing) wrote,
@ 2007-07-29 18:28:00
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Entry tags:fic, gen, jack/ianto

Title: Silver Predator
Author: [info]becky_h
Pairing: Jack and Ianto
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers Cyberwoman
Warnings: Angst and a real lack of sap.
Word Count: About 1,000
Beta: Endless thanks to [info]unfeathered, for making my stuff readable.
Prompt/Challenge: The Random Title Generator Challenge
Summary: Everyone seems to have a post-Cyberwoman story. This is mine. Jack and Ianto, more than Jack/Ianto, in the aftermath of Cyberwoman.
Author's Note: Lots of credit to [info]baffled_fandom for making it possible for me to write Ianto.


Jack doesn't clean up for Ianto. It's Ianto who clears away Lisa's body and the bodies of her victims and it's Ianto who gets down on his hands and knees and scrubs the blood off the floor. Jack's not going to do it for him.

Jack watches him work, with his arms folded across his chest and split lip throbbing in time with his pulse. When Ianto looks up at him - with all his rage contained in his eyes instead of spread all over his face in tears and snot and an angry flush - Jack nods and walks away.

While Ianto's in the bathroom, trying to scrub the blood off his hands, Jack goes to his office, gets out the crystal decanter of brandy and two glasses. By the time Ianto's finished and has made his way into the office, he's poured, and is sitting behind his desk with both glasses half full in front of him.

Ianto looks like shit, Jack thinks while he's sitting there and making Ianto wait for acknowledgment. His hands are raw and red, his suit is a disaster and he reeks of blood and bleach. When Ianto's composure frays and he fidgets - just weight shifting and his hands clasping and then unclasping - Jack cracks.

"Have a seat." He says it casually and leans back in his seat but his eyes stay on Ianto.

"Yes, sir," Ianto replies, comes in and sits. Of course he seems perfectly composed, like he's not wearing the imprint of Jack's teeth on his fist and the blood of three people all over his suit.

Jack's been fooled once. He's not going to be fooled again. He leans forward and nudges one of the glasses toward Ianto. "Have a drink. You look like you could use one."

Ianto takes the glass when Jack takes his own, but he doesn't drink. He just holds it in his folded hands and looks at Jack. "Retcon, Sir?"

Jack doesn't answer him, just lifts his eyebrows and takes a drink from his own glass. The spreading warmth is familiar and he takes the second to appreciate it and to un-knot the muscles in his neck.

"Are you going to notify the survivors?" Ianto asks, breaking the silence.

Jack takes another drink and continues to watch Ianto. "No."

Ianto's face has been closed off but Jack can see his answer isn't what Ianto expected. There's just a flicker of surprise in his eyes, the slight lift of one eyebrow before Ianto realizes what he's giving away and stops. "May I ask why not, sir?"

Sir's never sounded more like a euphemism for shit than it does coming from Ianto. "Because you are, Ianto." And Ianto's name's never sounded so much like a growl, sticking right at the back of Jack's throat, guttural and bitten off.

"Pardon?" Ianto asks, and this time surprise makes it all the way to his voice and his eyebrow makes it all the way up.

"You are," Jack repeats and finishes his drink. He sets the glass aside. He wants another drink but he won't let himself have it. "Drink," he tells Ianto, again and this time it really is an order.

Ianto looks at the glass and takes a very small sip, then looks up at Jack, eyes on him and burning. "As long as someone remembers them, they're not really dead. Have you ever heard that, sir?" he asks Jack, softly.

"You're not going to forget anything, Ianto. I'm not retconning you." Jack aches all over with exhaustion, but he's careful to keep weariness out of his voice. He thinks he probably just comes across as flat, and that's fine; he feels flat, too.

"Oh." He takes a slightly bigger drink, but there's something in the hesitation that makes him wonder if Ianto believes him and something in the fact that he's drinking that makes Jack wonder if maybe he does want to forget, in spite of himself. If he wants someone to make him forget. "What are you doing then?" Pause, hesitation and point. "Sir."

He hasn't shot Ianto, he isn't going to retcon him or notify the survivors, hasn't cleaned up. What is he going to do? Jack knows; Ianto doesn't.

Jack takes a deep breath, finds his empty glass and spins it between his fingers and tells him. When he talks his voice is hard, cold and flat. "I'm not going to do anything. You, on the other hand -"

"Oh, what am I doing then, sir?" His voice is silky smooth, but it's even colder than Jack's. It's also extremely patronizing.

I'm going to regret not shooting you if you don't stop calling me sir and pretending I don't know you want me dead. There's enough annoyance, irritation and frustration to revive his anger. It's the anger that brings the flash in his eyes and snap in Jack's voice that he needs now.

"You're going to tell Tanizaki and Carin's families that they were murdered. You're going to contact survivors of Torchwood One and tell them what happened here. You're going to clean up the shit."

By the time Jack's done speaking he's snarling and Ianto's staring at him like he's never seen Jack before. Ianto finishes his drink, one swallow that has to burn, nods and stands. "Yes, sir. I'll get right on it."

Jack looks at him, watches him while he stands and continues to watch him while Ianto leans forward to hand Jack the glass and Jack takes it. Jack doesn't know if the anger and horror in Ianto's eyes will ever completely die, if Ianto has ever trusted him or if he ever will again. "Go home, Ianto."

When Ianto's gone and Jack hears the door close he leaves his office and goes to the lowest level of the hub and starts working his way up. He doesn't know if he's ever going to trust Ianto again, either. He doesn't even know if he's ever going to be able to let a night go by without checking for monsters hidden in dark corners.

Lisa's gone and so is the Cyberman she became, but she left more shattered than the bodies of her victims. There's no way, Jack thinks, to lay these ghosts to rest, or sweep up the mess left by shattered trust.




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[info]likestowrite
2007-07-29 10:43 pm UTC (link)
I havent actually gotten around to writing a post cyberwoman fic. But this is a great change from what i've read previously. It's very believable, and dark which i'm enraptured by.

amazing work.

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-29 10:46 pm UTC (link)
I've seen a lot of post-cyberwoman stuff out there, but have to admit I haven't read very many of them (Mostly because I'm only slowly working my way into figuring out what I think of Ianto and Jack/Ianto). So, it's really nice to hear that this is at least a little different.

Thank you, so very much.

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[info]likestowrite
2007-07-29 10:52 pm UTC (link)
well to give you my opinion, in hopes of manipulating you to the Ianto/Jack camp: i love them as a pairing to bits, and naturally seperatly. (also a Tosh lover) just to throw it in

Most post cyberwoman fics tend to be Jack caring for Ianto and helping him, as great as those fics are, i really dp love your interpretation of events.

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-29 10:56 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, my views of Jack (in Torchwood) tend to be a little darker than a lot of fandom's I think, but I am definitely working my way toward making Jack/Ianto happen and that means being able to write them, which will be good. I figure if I follow up from here to they keep killing, I'll have achieved porn.

Er, ship. Whatever *G*

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[info]miss_andromache
2007-07-29 11:15 pm UTC (link)
This is really great. Because as much as I am a Jack/Ianto shipper, I'm not convinced that Jack was all niceness and light after the whole incident. I like that you have them not trusting, not even really liking each other very much in the end, it's a lot more realistic.

Thanks for sharing.

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-29 11:17 pm UTC (link)
I really think that the big hang up for me shipping Jack and Ianto, is that they were both so mad and hurt and angry during that episode and - I just had to deal with it in a way *I* could get before I could move past it.

I think I'm going to have to follow this up with a couple of more things and see if I can get them all the way into a ship. It'll probably not be a shippy ship or a really sappy one, but I can get it, now and that's good.

Thank you!

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[info]miss_zedem
2007-07-29 11:50 pm UTC (link)
He doesn't even know if he's ever going to be able to let a night go by without checking for monsters hidden in dark corners. OMG that line sent chills down my spine, it's just perfect.

This is a really lovely interpretation of their relationship - I love how cold they both are. It's just so... calculating, and emotionless, yet you can tell they're both really hurting for their own reasons that have nothing to do with each other.

I have to admit, I've never properly attempted a post-cyberwoman fic, which considering the sheer volume of J/I I've written is downright weird (then again it took me forever to do a stopwatch fic, so I think I'm just avoiding the cliches :P).

This is exactly how I see their relationship starting - mistrustful, angry, nasty - not all love and hearts and romance.

Very, very nice :D

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-29 11:52 pm UTC (link)
*CHEERS!* Thank you! Yeah, I really think I can see J/I now, and even do so pretty easily, but I definitely can't see it being fluffy - at least not at the start. There's just - there was so much anger and pain in that ep and and and.

Thank you again. You made my evening *G*

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[info]_medley_
2007-07-30 12:21 am UTC (link)
::stares:: This...this is Torchwood Jack, right here, and the kind of Ianto I can believe in. I'm just kind of sitting here blinking in fascination at this, but I'll try to be coherent.

Jack. Made. Ianto. Deal with Lisa's body. Wow. Powerful image, there. And after that, Ianto thinks Jack's going to retcon him? Like Jack's going to let him forget this, forget endangering the people Jack's devoted himself to protecting, to endangering the *planet?* The depths of Ianto's not getting it here are a little staggering. Totally believeable, but staggering.

And then this:"Oh, what am I doing then, sir?" His voice is silky smooth, but it's even colder than Jack's.

That gives me chills. That's a Ianto who could hide a monster in the basement for however long and act perfectly cool and composed doing it.

And, God, I can just see Jack checking the entire Hub every damned night just to make sure nothing like this happens again. This is so, so awesome. And kinda creepifying.

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-30 12:25 am UTC (link)
I will maintain, until the sun has gone out, Jack has had time to check in with all his exes, and no matter what Gwen says, that Jack would have shot Ianto. I am sure there are others who disagree, and that's fine. I still think Jack would've shot his ass.

That bit of meta out of the way - Thank you, so much. It is kinda creepy and dark and squirmy and. I'm really glad it worked for you!

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[info]_medley_
2007-07-30 12:47 am UTC (link)
Jack has had time to check in with all his exes, and no matter what Gwen says, that Jack would have shot Ianto.

It's been a while since I've seen Torchwood and I'm also really tired, so I'm probably just not tracking, but I'm not following you. 'Splain, please? Exes what?

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-30 12:49 am UTC (link)
OH! There's a line in Day One where Jack says 'Good thing we don't have to check with all of mine (exes). We'd be here until the sun explodes."

AKA: It'd take a really long time. The other thing is just Gwen at the end of the episode saying "You wouldn't have shot him. You wouldn't have really. Would you have shot me?"

And Jack just *stands there* and doesn't answer.

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[info]_medley_
2007-07-30 01:30 am UTC (link)
Hee! OK, it's all clear now. Plus, I've just gone back and watched the relevant bits of the episode, and oh, yeah, Jack would've shot him.

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-30 01:30 am UTC (link)
He was *MAD*.

...Jack mad makes me happy.

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[info]_medley_
2007-07-30 01:38 am UTC (link)
Jack just about any way makes me happy, but yeah, mad is a good flavor of Jack. Half-broken's not bad, either, but that's another story. *eg*

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[info]donutsweeper
2007-07-30 12:52 am UTC (link)
oooh, very powerful. Jack HATES to have someone try to con or put something over on him. Lots of great imagery here

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-30 12:52 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]smithy161
2007-07-30 02:39 am UTC (link)
This is fantastic. So emotional and atmospheric, and very them. I can see your Ianto really working for me. Which is more than I can say for telly!Ianto.
Go Jack, asserting his authority! I love Jack trotting around after the Doctor, but alpha male Jack is much more fun.

Anyway, yes, tiredness eating brain now, so I go.

Great fic!

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-30 02:50 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you - and yeah, definitely. It's fun to see the flip from him trotting after the Doctor to being Alpha male and Ianto's just. Make him make sense on screen now *please*.

And yes. SLeep is good - SLEEP.

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[info]psyko_kittie
2007-07-30 04:17 am UTC (link)
Oh. Wow! Great fic.

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-30 04:18 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]jadesfire2808
2007-07-30 06:35 am UTC (link)
Oh, this is more like it - this is how I want to see Jack and Ianto. No easy answers, no sweeping up into anyone's arms, just raw pain and anger. While I'll write Jack/Ianto and enjoy reading it, I find it hard to buy into 100% as anything other than an arrangement, something that suits both of them at the time. And this starts them out just right - mistrust, fury and coldness with that bubbling emotion underneath.

Great stuff.

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-30 06:39 am UTC (link)
I'm getting onboard with Jack/Ianto, but in a way that's a lot...harder than a lot of fandom. I can move a little past arrangement given enough time, but true love? No way. Way too much baggage tied up in the Cyberwoman in the Basement - both what caused it to begin with and how it all ended.

Thank you!

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[info]_alicesprings
2007-07-30 08:03 am UTC (link)
This was awesome! One of the best TW fics I've come across in my short foray into the fandom. It's so lovely to find really good stuff (I've been struggling so far!)

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-30 08:07 am UTC (link)
Thank you, so much! What a wonderful compliment to find in my inbox, first thing in the morning.

(And if you're having a hard time - This rec list by [info]melina123 is absolutely fantastic. Some of my stuff's there, but I swear I'm not self-promising. She has a real knack for finding the good stuff and gathering it together in an easy to navigate format that makes it easy to find what you want. TW's so big with so much STUFF that it gets exhausting and overwhelming - well, for me, anyway)

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[info]_alicesprings
2007-07-30 08:13 am UTC (link)
Oh wow, thank you! That's brilliant!

There really is SO MUCH STUFF here, and it's hard to know what's good as a newcomer. I mean, I can tell you 500 good Queer as Folk fics, but coming into a completely new fandom can be v overwhelming. I've found like 5 fics I've liked so far and about 20 I haven't. So, thanks!

I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-30 08:15 am UTC (link)
I totally understand. (And speaking of QaF ... No, I'll behave and not actually *ask* for you to point me at stuff there.) I'm glad I could help and I look forward to seeing you around!

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[info]_alicesprings
2007-07-30 08:23 am UTC (link)
Lol, I'll just volunteer then.

There's some amazing QaF fic out there. I have a few links saved on the side of my LJ of my absolute faves - Subject to Change, Divergence, From a Safe Distance etc.

You should join [info]qaf_retread. It's an archive of (IMO since I run it!) the very best fic in the fandom. There's hundreds in the memories and they are all top-shelf.

And you should also check out stuff by [info]xie_xie_xie, [info]plumsuede, [info]vamphile, [info]flashfly, [info]severina2001 ... I could go on all night!

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-30 08:24 am UTC (link)
Awesome! Thank you, so much. I really discovered QaF late and I kind of flailed when I realized how MUCH of it there was and had no idea how to find anything. This is brilliant!

...and so's your icon *G*

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[info]_alicesprings
2007-07-30 08:29 am UTC (link)
You're welcome! There's tons there to get you started.

As for the icon, B/J are extremely pretty. They can do no wrong ;)

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[info]amycorvus
2007-07-30 03:52 pm UTC (link)
Sorry this is a bit off topic, but it seems like a perfect place to air a thought I've been dying to share: Who do you think would win in the alpha-male stakes between Jack and Brian Kinney?

And great story! I read all your stuff as you have a lovely clear, concise method of narration and a frequently wonderful turn of phrase :)

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-30 04:36 pm UTC (link)
I don't mind off topic!

I think probably for play or sex Brian would come out on top, as it were, and Jack would probably let him and love it. On the other hand I think if Jack got really good and pissed off Brian would end up against a wall and really, really, annoyed/surprised/reluctantly impressed about it.

That or they'd just roll around with a lot of growling and hot.

And - have you read this? : http://community.livejournal.com/vintagemilitary/5774.html

If not - Brian/Jack and HOT.

(And thank you! I'm glad you like my stuff and it works for you!)

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[info]amycorvus
2007-07-31 01:28 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for that link! It pretty much encapsulates the whole scenario nicely, good find :)
And yes, Brian/Jack = HOT!

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[info]talaayn
2007-07-30 01:49 pm UTC (link)
This is really good. I've read allot of Cyberwoman fics but they're all really angsty and it's usually Jack forgiving Ianto and everyone's happy again. You've written both characters really really well. This could probably be a missing scene, i reckon they should have written in something like this, So i'm glad someone's written it :) It's realistc, totally in character, and completely belivable. I really enjoyed reading it.

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-30 04:29 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, so much. That's a wonderful happy compliment and missing scenes are good - hearing they WORKED and are IC and realistic just makes me grin.

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[info]pike2
2007-07-30 09:02 pm UTC (link)
Enjoyed this. Dark and brooding. Thanks for a great fic.

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[info]becky_writing
2007-07-30 09:04 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for letting me know!

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[info]ana_grrl
2007-08-01 11:16 pm UTC (link)
Oooh, really nice. I love the way you show Jack's anger mixed in with his regret at what he's lost in losing trust in Ianto.

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[info]becky_writing
2007-08-01 11:18 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! *beams* That thrills me to bits.

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[info]qaffangyrl
2008-04-18 02:15 am UTC (link)
very powerful. great job.

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[info]becky_writing
2008-04-18 05:47 am UTC (link)
Thank you, so much.

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[info]jadesfire2808
2008-06-03 08:11 am UTC (link)
The last podfic of the season. Thanks for letting me play!

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